Elaine 4 Seph

I'm afraid the proportions in this picture are all wrong. The arms are too short and the torso looks too long. Elaine's right leg joint is too low. It's supposed to be at the top of the hip. The area where her breasts meet her armpits is also wrong, the lines of the sides of the breasts shouldn't joint with the armpits. The facial expression also looks flat and given the angle her head is at the position and shape of the eyes is wrong. In this position the left eye should look thinner and be slightly closer to the nose.
In the end the overall pose just looks inconsistent.

Sorry if I'm being overly anal Lone, but if you want to sell your work you've got to imporve your anatomy.